We write this because we are concerned about problems with scientific rigor in a paper recently published by McNab and Weston (2020). The paper is based on a limited, poor-quality dataset, lacks statistical analysis, focuses on out-dated literature and makes conclusions that are not related to the data presented.

The title asks whether a passerine bird, the New Zealand rockwren (Xenicus gilviventris), can hibernate. This seems reasonable given that these birds are small and largely sedentary, eat invertebrates and live at high elevation, where they apparently can nest in snow banks. However, the Introduction does not provide a coherent rationale for asking this question and, in the Results, there are no data addressing the question. Instead, much of the Introduction is devoted to Woods et al.’s (2019) evidence that an unrelated non-passerine, the common poorwill (Phalaenoptilus nuttallii), hibernates, with some discussion of a few passerines that enter shallow torpor. The rationale leading to the main question of the paper is weak and in the Introduction, the text on whether poorwills hibernate is contradictory. The argument in the Introduction that hibernation can only occur under constant cold thermal conditions has been refuted in many recent papers reporting data on free-ranging individuals (Stawski et al., 2014; Woods et al., 2019; Nowack et al., 2020). More alarmingly, though, the data that follow provide no evidence to support the paper's title or conclusions.

One rockwren reduced body temperature (Tb) from a normothermic, resting level of 36.4°C, to a minimum of 33.1°C, a drop of 3.3°C. Dehydrated camels (Camelus dromedarius) and other large mammals reduce their Tb more than this (Hetem et al., 2016) and, clearly, they are not hibernators. Based on most thresholds in the literature used to define torpor in endotherms, a drop of only 3.3°C or a minimum Tb of 33.1°C would barely qualify as shallow torpor, let alone provide evidence of hibernation. Hibernating mammals and birds reduce Tb by vastly more than this, often by 35 to 40°C below normothermia to approximately 5°C on average (McKechnie and Lovegrove, 2002; Ruf and Geiser, 2015).

McNab and Weston (2020) report that metabolism in two rockwrens during single measurements was somewhat reduced, ostensibly by 30–35%. The authors note that birds did not settle in the chamber, so this result is unreliable but, in any case, this reduction is not sufficient evidence for hibernation, when hibernators often reduce metabolism by 99% or more. As for Tb, based on the metabolic data reported, there is no evidence that the rockwrens hibernated, and it is questionable whether they even entered torpor. Metabolism and Tb data are shown in Fig. 1, but the figure is uninterpretable. There is no explanation for how ‘regression’ lines were derived, only three of six individuals are identified and no statistical analysis is described in the paper.

The authors' claim that thermal energetics of rockwrens differ from those of other passerines is also incorrect. In general, passerines seem to be homeothermic or do not express deep torpor, but reductions in resting Tb by 5 to 15°C from approximately 40°C have been commonly reported (e.g. McKechnie and Lovegrove, 2002; Schleucher, 2004). Tits (Parus spp.), even though they express shallow torpor, reduce Tb by approximately twice as much (by 5–10°C) as rockwrens. The authors contend that rockwrens spontaneously rewarmed from 33.1 to 36.0°C and, therefore, conclude that the Tb reduction was controlled. However, as clearly shown in Fig. 2, this ‘arousal’ only occurred after exposure to an ambient temperature of 30.1°C, not the 9.4°C at which minimum Tb was recorded. Given this, it is just as likely that the birds exhibited shallow, uncontrolled hypothermia in response to cold exposure, and rewarming was aided by the rise in ambient temperature.

There are also problems with the methodology and reporting of it. The Materials and Methods state that metabolic rates were recorded for 6 h from 19:00 to 01:00 h and Tb was measured (using a device and procedure never identified) in intervals of 1.5 to 2 h. Therefore, it is of no surprise that birds did not enter torpor as they were prevented from doing so because they were frequently disturbed. Entry into avian torpor can take many hours, almost never occurs within 1–2 h of the start of measurements or after a disturbance, and usually requires a calm, undisturbed animal. The respirometry protocol is also problematic. The authors used 1.5 liter chambers to measure metabolism and the lowest flow rate was 105 ml min−1, meaning that 66 min would be needed to reach 99% equilibrium (Withers, 2001). Thus, oxygen consumption values averaged over only 20 min are not accurate.

Although less serious than problems of methodology and inference, most of the thermal energetics citations are out of date and recent thermal biology studies on free-ranging passerines are missed. For example, Romano et al. (2019) reported that Australian fairy-wrens (Malurus cyaneus) reduce skin temperature by approximately 14°C from 41 to 27°C, followed by endogenous rewarming. The one recent study on babblers (Pomatostomus superciliosus) that is cited is misreported. Although these birds reduce Tb at night similar to rockwrens, Douglas et al. (2017) emphasize that babblers do not express torpor, but rather use huddling to save energy.

We were motivated to point out the issues with this paper not only to inform non-specialist readers but also as mentors of students whom we are trying to train to be critical of the peer-review process.

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